https://youtu.be/TG-m3LSb5OQ
What stood out to me about the feedback was the lack of it. There was literally no feedback because no one watched the video. That's okay, but that doesn't give me much to reflect on.
I have not changed in response to criticism. I continue to feel nervous in front of the camera and I have not improved my camera skills. From the first time I did this, I have moved to a more informal setting of the outdoors. I have used my phone because my laptop can't seem to record video any more. I ensured I mentioned how the company would make money.
ReplyDeleteHi Mikalee,
I just wanted to start by saying great work, you have a great title for your video, and you can really see that you have put a lot of thought and consideration into your product and this pitch. You can really see the progress over your 3 elevator pitches, and you have put a lot of work into doing better each time. I like that you filmed this outside because it matches the product that you are trying to sell, the only thing that would make this better would be to maybe include a dog in your video!
Hey Mikalee,
ReplyDeleteFirst off, sorry to hear about the lack of feedback but you did great with your video. I would say the only thing that I would have fixed was the lighting but it was good other than that. I loved your hook and how you took your pitch to make it fun; it grabs the attention of viewers and potential investors. Your idea correlates with mine and I love it, just as much as I love animals (which is a lot).
Mikalee,
ReplyDeleteReally nice job on your elevator pitch! I like how calm and collected you were throughout, it made it much easier for your audience to follow along and clearly hear and understand what you were saying. You see very confident in your business concept which I think=nk is one of the most important things a successful entrepreneur need to have!I think you have a very unique idea that dog owners would find so much more convenient and even make something that's viewed as a chore, enjoyable!
Hi Mikalee,
ReplyDeleteSorry you did not receive any feedback from your last elevator pitch. I can definitely see the improvement from your first one though. I like you hook, you speech is calm and very understandable, which is very helpful for me since English is not my language.
I personally do not have any dog or pet but If I did i would totally buy it, or I might for some friends.
Thank you for sharing!